I mean this comment in the most constructive way possible but the story has got to be more spaced out and built up. Idk if its cause the audio was quiet or what but I didnt hear any of the radio bits or the guy talking. Maybe they gave more info on the story and lore but the only lore I got was in the 10 second bit that came out of nowhere when trying to leave the store and it just felt really out of the blue. Overall though not bad and I think you've got solid ideas its just the execution of them you gotta mess with
Short but not bad at all for being your first game! English could be improved in the dialogue as it does seem like it was directly from google translate. Besides that, not bad. Made a video on it.
This was a fun little game my dude! For your first project very solid! I would say just add a sprint or turn up the movement speed, and turn up the dialog volume on the characters so its easier to hear! Fun little story I enjoyed! Here is my gameplay video, sub and help my channel grow! :)
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I LIKE
but...sadly i dont know how to make unity games valve games also
w game!
i can't open the door of the storee
it was nice but my game is very very laggy
FOR REAL THO MY GAME WAS LAGGING TO!
It was a pretty alright game man, laggy asf for me.
Nice! I liked the scary moments :O
very fun game I'm looking forward for your next game
really good game! keep going at it!
Pretty good game for the first time. Hopefully you can make a better game for your next project... :)
I mean this comment in the most constructive way possible but the story has got to be more spaced out and built up. Idk if its cause the audio was quiet or what but I didnt hear any of the radio bits or the guy talking. Maybe they gave more info on the story and lore but the only lore I got was in the 10 second bit that came out of nowhere when trying to leave the store and it just felt really out of the blue. Overall though not bad and I think you've got solid ideas its just the execution of them you gotta mess with
Really charming game :)
Short but not bad at all for being your first game! English could be improved in the dialogue as it does seem like it was directly from google translate. Besides that, not bad. Made a video on it.
Estubo bien
NICE SPOOKY
nice
Nice very good game I like it and well made looking forward more your games in future anyway well done keep it up!